My
Favorite Writer (Expository Paragraph)
Jacqueline
Wilson is my all time favorite writer. She wrote books that relate to
teenagers, especially girls. When I was in grade three, I borrowed a book from
the library called ”Best Friends” and it was one of my favorite books. It was
about a precious friendship between two girls and they had been together since
they were born. Through the story, I could stroke a cord with the characters
and relate to the feelings I had with them. Since then, I appealed to Jacqueline’s
style of writing and her charming way of getting the readers relate to her
stories.
Furthermore, Jacqueline Wilson wrote stories based on real life,
including romance, break-ups, families, friendships and so on. She had many
good topics for her stories and many of them were unique and could make me read
again and again. Sometimes, stories could make me laugh but also sad at the
same time. Also, her writing style was humorous and heart touching. Besides,
the illustrations of covers and inside the chapters are beautiful and
interesting. I loved her book so much that I had collected nearly twenty of her
books on my shelf. Sometimes in leisure time, I would pick up one of them and
instantly fall in love with her story again. Jacqueline Wilson’s book was one
of my childhood memories that I treasure. I certainly appreciate her writing
and she was definitely a writer that I would recognize to anyone.
Good word choices. Your use of lots of adjectives make it very readable.
回覆刪除 you sometimes forget to use pronouns in your sentences. A lot of the 'add a word' comments want you to use a pronoun
Hints: who; recommend; sb. can relate to sb./sth.; sth. strikes a chord with sb.; sth. appeals to sb.
I like your introduction of Jacqueline Wilson, very detailed and interesting. it really attract me to read her book.
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